Tree of Secrets
The tree holds many secrets...and the tree would seldom reveal
many a times ...when things are down...I make this fervent appeal :
Come on ! O TREE !!! Please tell it all
why don’t you make things clear !
And the tree just smiles....the branches sway.....
... few hints are dropped ..... I am sad no more....I swear !!!
many a times ...when things are down...I make this fervent appeal :
Come on ! O TREE !!! Please tell it all
why don’t you make things clear !
And the tree just smiles....the branches sway.....
... few hints are dropped ..... I am sad no more....I swear !!!
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lhanaiiadded on 04 May 2009 at 3:58 PM
I liked it, short yet strong and deep from the heart.Only one little detail, in my opinion the poem would have kept it's strengthif you had omitted the last expression of"I swear""I am sad no more", already states your position,the last two words weaken or make your point redundant.
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